Class 4/9 Fan's Video Response

Fan's Video Crit

1. The video needs work on the flow of graphical relationships as well as trasitions. It was a bit choppy with too many images that didnt flow well together. Maybe slow down the pace of the video? and use less images and repeat some of the stronger images?

2. The video's pace was pretty fast paced. It was initially really fast in the begining, then slowed down slightly, then picked up pace again. The overall pace was very fast, yet there was some variation

3. The artist did not abstract any images

4. Color temperature: Good- used a variety of colors- most were brighter and lighter colors
Graphical layout: some changing of focal points, yet the frames were very fast so it was hard to notice
Camera Angles: all angles were fairly similar
Proximity: Good-especially with the one still frame of "be Happy"- kept repeating the same image but a little bit closer each time
Pacing: needs work- i like the idea you were going for, you just need to fine tune it and take some images out- dont try to keep up with the exact pace of the sound piece
Repetition: good- repeated several images which was very effective throughout piece
Sensitivity to light: most images had outdoor lighting or bright light